I was spending the day in the city, with her.
Unfortunately, it began to heavily snow. And the rain proceeded.
But I thought it was nothing we couldn't endure
Since we had each other. She was all I needed.
With every step in the snow I took, there was more stress.
And the rain had me soaked. It infiltrated my sneakers.
But none of that mattered. All that mattered was her happiness.
I wasn't even worried about us getting sick or even worse, fevers.
With every picture we took together,
She smiled for me. Like she was falling in love again.
Her presence easily helped me overcome the weather's displeasure.
If she wasn't there to hold my hand, the snow would have driven me insane.
Moments like these make me realize that she's the one for me
She's truly irreplaceable. I'm grateful that she's mine.
I can't imagine taking anyone else to the giant christmas tree
And sharing a romantic moment with them like we did. It was the best time.

This is so cute, Ruben! I like the rhyme scheme that you used and some of the words that you used, like how the rain "infiltrated" your sneakers. Good job! :)
ReplyDeleteCongratulations Ruben. I'm glad you didn't let rain ruin your time with her. You are good person for writing this poem about the girl you like. Mad respect for you!
ReplyDeleteThis is really cute and adorable, Mr.Loverboy! I loved your poem it made me want to tear because of how cute it was, Love you and Cristina together! So cute!
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